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Post by Pendance on Jul 27, 2005 15:58:09 GMT -5
 its good but not great, its my first one! ^_^ score! LOL its not a masterpeice but its mine! ~_^  lol incase you cant read it:
You disgrace this school!
How pathetic!
What?!
Who...are you...
For your saftey my name wont be given. Pay respect to the man you attacked!
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Post by Gentatsu on Jul 27, 2005 18:43:25 GMT -5
Nice comic. Its a little confusing though. I suggest you develop more of a background and opening. In my comic I develop stting by starting out wide and zooming in. Then I back that up with the facts. For your word bubles remember to keep your lettering parallel to the bottom of the page. A ruler may also help.
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Post by Pendance on Jul 27, 2005 18:48:31 GMT -5
thankies for the tips
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